
On Punctuation
preaching order and a sure conclusion
and no not for me the prissy
formality or tight-lipped fence
of the colon and as for the semi-
colon call it what it is
a period slumming
with the commas
a poser at the bar
feigning liberation with one hand
tightening the leash with the other
oh give me the headlong run-on
fragment dangling its feet
over the edge give me the sly
comma with its come-hither
wave teasing all the characters
on either side give me ellipses
not just a gang of periods
a trail of possibilities
or give me the sweet interrupting dash
the running leaping joining dash all the voices
gleeing out over one another
oh if I must
punctuate
give me the YIPPEE
of the exclamation point
give me give me the curling
cupping curve mounting the period
with voluptuous uncertainty
--Elizabeth Austen

26 comments:
I grinned from ear-to-ear as I read one of my favorites. And I whole-heartedly agree with the write. ☺ Thanks, Betty! Happy Tuesday!
Sexy punctuation. Oh, my.
I hadn't seen this before. It is hysterical. Thanks for the good laugh.Hope you have a good day.
I always knew there was something sneaky about punctuation.
Pearl
Such a fun poem. I love this one!! Thanks for the smile this morning, Betty. Have a great day! :-)
Not being a big fan of poetry, I'd never read this before. But I loved it. Thanks for posting it.
Ha, now that is a different perspective. I use commas at the same rate a 6 year old loses tokens at Chuck E. Cheese (sorry that was lousy).
Yippeeeee for the exclamation point!!!!!!!! Hooorah!!!!!
:-)
Take care
x
That's awesome! Lol! :)
Very nice poem never heard it.
Madi's favorite punctuation mark is a question mark she walks around the house with a question mark tail most days...which is good...it means she is greeting us happily.
Hugs C
I had never seen this one! What fun!
Wow. I am in love with this poem!! I will never look at an exclamation point or a question mark the same way ever again.
So clever and so correct...,,,;;;;!!!
Hugs~
That's #%@&!# great.
Love, Love, Love this poem. It gives me license to be licentious with my punctuation.
That was clever!
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Oooo - blushing at the end there!
Great poem!
That's great, Betty! I consider myself the comma queen. I tend to overdo it a bit.
cute poem but it reminded me how horrible I am with punctuation :)
That...was...awesome!!!!!!!
Betty, hadn't seen this poem ..love it ..thaks for sharing. Have copied it to read and enjoy another time. Thanks.
Since I have a serious love affairs with ellipses.....I TOTALLY loved this poem!
I love it. I'm going to share with the English department at school.
Thank you for the smile Betty!
I've always like that one and haven't seen it for years!
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